A different ending

 

Hello everyone, now I will show you my experience reading on English e-Reader. This time I will imagine different ending in the story that I have read.

I have read story entitled Halloween horror. The author is Clemen D. B. Gina. This story has 3.962 words from 19 pages. I read this story at level A1 starter.

This story tells about five student named Kelly, Megan, Susan, Nick, and Bill who want to have a Halloween party. First of all, they make a plan about the Halloween party. A student named Bill found one old house which is close to the forest. They don’t now if that old house is the witch’s house. Then they go to the old house, their friend named Susan is the first to know that it is a witch’s house. She tells to them, but Bill still want to make the party at that house because according to him, it is the perfect place to make the Halloween party. They continued with their plans, and immediately clean it up. They also decorated the house with a Halloween theme.

It’s time for the Halloween party. They also invited some of their schoolmates. Their wearing scary clothes. Their friend named Kelly wearing dress like a witch named Abigail cross. The party is lively and festive. Some students dance, eat, and laugh.  Then they play a game called treasure hunt. Everyone has different maps. Kelly get a share in the basement. She looks inside a big barrel.  Suddenly an old lady standing by the barrel. Evidently the old lady is the witch named Abigail cross, and the she says, on this night we spirit look for young bodies. When we find a young body, we can live again. At midnight my spirit enters your body. You must die so that I can live. Then the witch makes Kelly sleep and put her in to the barrel. She takes off Kelly’s mask and wig too.

When almost midnight, the students want to see behind every mask they wear. Every student takes off their mask when asked. Until they ask ‘how is the old lady’, then the witch open the mask. They all get scared and panic when they see the face behind the old lady mask. They want get out, but another witch spirit is outside and blocking them. Then Bill look for Kelly on the basement. He looks in all the barrels. Finally, he sees Kelly who is sleeping in the barrel. But one candle fall on the table and the fire is spreading. All the students are scared, because they can’t open the door. Its two minutes to midnight. Suddenly the fire burn Abigail’s portrait at the house. They are shocked because Abigail Cross and the witch spirits are burning. Then the door is opening and all of the students runs outside. The fire destroys the house and the evil ghost inside. Finally, they go back to their own house. In the morning Kelly wake up and go to the bathroom. She shocked, when she looking in the mirror. A red mark around her neck and she hear a mysterious voice in the mirror says, “When you play with fire, Kelly, you burn your fingers!”.

Now I will make the end of the story according to my imagination.

Finally, they can get out. But Kelly still not aware. So, Megan, Susan, Nick, and Bill take her to the hospital. Megan and Susan cry, when they arrived at the hospital. “I’m so sorry”, Bill say. “This will not happen if we don’t follow your stupid idea!”, says Megan while cry. “But right now, Kelly is in the hospital, so don’t worry everything will be fine”, says Nick. “We have been trough all of this and I hope no quarrels between us”, added Nick. They are sad and panic. After 7 hours, Kelly wake up. “Kelly is wake up”, says Susan when she sees Kelly’s eyes open. Then Kelly say “where are me?”. Megan answer while happy “you in the hospital, my sister”. Then Kelly look at them and say “Who are you?”. They all get shocked when they hear what Kelly says.

-THE END-